Date: Jan 19, 2011 11:57:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Eyes Wide Shut
Wow! I really liked this so much! You're both very talented, so combining your ideas was a great plan!!! You're a really good writer, Nikki, and i know how much this story meant to Sarah :D She wouldn't stop rambling about it for weeks!!!
I hope you write another story soon, i love your work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I loved working with Sarah to get this story to properly capture the essence of Blood Omen, so I'm pleased that it turned out this way :D
I have a few more stories in the works, and I'm looking forward to sharing those ^^ *hugs* Thanks!
Date: Dec 29, 2010 07:24:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Eyes Wide Shut
When I saw a story by you and Rah-Rah, I freaked out, flappy hands and all. Then I read the summery and realized it was a continuation of Blood Omen, and I literally shrieked with delight.
Thank you thank you thank you thank you SO MUCH for this story. I absolutely adored Blood Omen, and this is a wonderful continuation of it. You put so much detail into your stories, and you have such a beautiful way of writing... *sighs*
You're absolutely amazing. You and Rah-Rah both. *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you!! *hugs* I have literally no words to describe how happy your review makes me! I'm so pleased that you liked it, and that you like my writing style! Thank YOU!!!
Yes, Rah-Rah is amazing for writing such a brilliant story, and were it not for that, this would never have been written *tacklehugs Rah-Rah* And she is absolutely wonderful for letting me post this :D
Thank you so much! *hugs*
Date: Dec 29, 2010 06:38:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Eyes Wide Shut
Wooooooooah!!!! This was absolutely amazing!!!! *nods frantically*
"The Goddess of Death came that day,
To wash his sin away,
To steal the emptiness within his eyes,
To follow through his end, his demise..."
I just love that part ! *points*
I just love how you decided to make a sequel (it's a sequel, or something alike, right?) on Sarah's story!!!!!! And it turned out soooooo awesome!!!
Poor Strify, though. I guess he'll be happy now? *hugs him*
Mwahahaahaa!! Kali is mean. *giggles*
Author's Response: Thank you!! *hugs* I'm so pleased you liked it! And my random little poem, I'm happy you liked that too :D
Yep, it was intended as a little sort of conclusion, I guess, to the story, showing what happened to Strify afterwards ^^ Hopefully Strify will be happy now :) And yep, Kali is mean *laughs* xD
I'm go glad you enjoyed this story! *hugs* Thank you!
Date: Dec 29, 2010 04:38:55 am Title: Chapter 1 - Eyes Wide Shut
It's a great ending :) I loved "Blood Omen" even though Kali seemed sorta evil in this one....
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I know, she does seem kinda evil, but I guess if she was a projection of his broken mind, she'd be sorta twisted. That was my weird take on it anyway, lol :D Thank you for reading and reviewing *hugs*
Date: Dec 29, 2010 02:41:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - Eyes Wide Shut
(first to review!)
Ok, Nikki, i will be honest! When i first heard you wanted to write a fanfic based on Blood Omen, i couldn't believe my ears!
Then when i read it, i burst out crying! This story is the very ESSENSE of Blood Omen, you have managed to do such a brilliant, amazing job!
As i have mentioned before, your writing is incredible. it is unlike ANYTHING i have ever read before, and it takes my breath away! I am so proud, so in AWE of the fact you like my work, and i will be forever in your DEBT for this!
Now; onto the real review!
What i love about this story is that it is realistic and clearly portrays Strify's grief and dispair over what happened to Shin and Kali. It is so amazingly descriptive and beautiful.
I also LOVE the fact that you mentioned parts from MY story, like the mall and such, because it made me feel so happy that you remembered them. Those tiny details make this story breath-taking. You have put so much effort into it, and i am bowled over by your talent!
*is almost in tears again!* thank you SO much; Nikki! I am just...GAH! i can't even BEGIN to tell you how much this means to me!
THANK YOU FOR BEING SUCH AN AMAZING PERSON! You are one of my very best friends, and i will always be so happy to have met you! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!
Love a very, very, very joyful twin!
Love Sarah *tacklesmoosh* MWAH! THANK YOU!!!!!!
Author's Response: I don't know what to say, Sarah! *hugs* I think I say this every time, but really, I'm just so glad that you like it. I never, ever would have posted this without your permission, and to have that and be able to post it was just amazing :D I'm proud of it because you like it, and I'm proud that I could do Blood Omen justice ^^
I tried as best I could to get as much from the original story into this one, cause I wanted to make sure that every part of Kali and Strify's relationship could be seen in this :D If it worked just a little, then I'm happy!
*hugs* Thank you for being an amazing friend!! You are also one of my best friends, and I am so, so glad that we have this friendship *glomp*
Much love! MWAH!