Date: Jun 22, 2011 12:09:39 am Title: Chapter 22
I love this chapter- Nisse is ahving conflicting emotions! >:D
I've been studying Swedish for the better part of three years, so I know it pretty well. But I'm not quite fluent yet, as I've never spoken with somebody who is fluent before. I've used podcasts on iTunes, so I suggest you give those a try if you're still interested in it!
Author's Response: Hej Spencer!
*laughs* I like it too, but I sort of feel so sorry for Nisse :(
Oh wow! I've only been learning it for a few months now, so it's awesome you've been learning it for 3 years! This might be a wierd question but how are you learning it? Through school or college?
*nods* I've got some podcasts, they're pretty helpful! I've also got a Swedish dictonary thing that helps me but it's pronounciation that I really suck at!
Tack så mycket för att ta sig tid att granska och ge mig några råd!Kärlek Sarah
Date: Apr 22, 2011 01:03:54 am Title: Chapter 29
Awwwh!! This was so sweet! *hugs all around* I'm glad calle isn't angry anymore. =)
Thank you Sarah for sharing this amazing story with us! *hugs* It was really awesome!!!!! ^_^
P.S. Since when do you speak Swedish? *is curious* Which is, by the way, awesome!! xDD
Bye, bye for now! *waves*
Author's Response: *hugs* Me too! Calle isn't too nice when he is angry!
*hugs* Awww, thank YOU for being so amazing and sticking by me throughout the whole thing! ^-^
Well, I started speaking it about halfway through this story but I do not speak it well! *hugs* Awww, i'm glad you think it is awesome!
*waves* Bye for now! From a very happy Sarah
Date: Apr 22, 2011 12:52:26 am Title: Chapter 28
Geez! Slow down with all the information, Shin! You'll mum will get a heart-attack. xD ... I like his mum! She's really sweet. ^_^
Evil slut! How dare she slap Nisse?! *glares* However, he could've bring it a bit easier to her. Like It's over or something like that. I think that was just too much for her small brain. *nods slowly* ;D
Oh for crying out loud!! Can't they have at least one evening alone, without anybody interrupting them? *pouts* Not fair! :/
Author's Response: *laughs* Maybe that's what he's trying to do! But yes, she is very sweet! *happy smiley face*
LMAO! I totally agree with that description and with what you said, but...doing it this way makes sure she understands it's over
*shakes head* that would be too easy! I like making it hard for them *evil laugh*
Date: Apr 22, 2011 12:38:30 am Title: Chapter 27
WHAT?! Shin had a twin?! *gulp* Nope, I didn't see that coming. *shakes head*
"Shin was standing behind him, trying to look small and inconspicuous." I laughed so hard on this! Oh yeah... xDD
I believe that didn't work though. He's a bit tall... *nods slowly* xD
Author's Response: *nods* I thought it would be a good twist!
*giggles* I did too! He is WAYYYYY too tall to be inconspicuous!!!!!
Date: Apr 22, 2011 12:25:44 am Title: Chapter 26
*squeaks* YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy that they are friends again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *bounces*
Toooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! (this actually means a long yes in my language xD) He'll dye his hair blond!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does a happy dance*
This chapter made me extremely happy! In case you didn't notice. xDD
I know it's over already but, Nope! It ain't moving to fast. The timing is perfect! =))
Author's Response: *hugs and bounces* Oh yay! I'm soooooooo glad you're happy!!!! OH! Well, TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *grins*
*laughs* You're so cute! It's wonderful you're so happy!!!!!!
*flails* Oh yay!
Date: Apr 21, 2011 11:52:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
*hugs Nisse* Poor guy. I really feel bad for him. Anna May is annoying. I hope he and Shin'll be together 'cause this sucks. I hate to see him sad. *sniffles*
Author's Response: *hugs8 Oh, i know, right?! I hated seeing him sad too :(
Date: Apr 21, 2011 11:42:29 pm Title: Chapter 23
Poor Nisse. xD She's so - weirdish! *shivers* I'll have my fingers crossed for him. =)
P.S. I don't like that woman. :/
I am so sorry for not reviewing earlier!!! *hides in the closet* I was really busy with studying (Still am.) so I didn't have much free time. :/ I'm really, really sorry!!!
Author's Response: *hugs* it's ok! I've just missed you, that's all! :(
*hugs* She really IS wierd! I didn't like writing about her too much!
Date: Feb 12, 2011 10:46:55 pm Title: Chapter 18
Okay, so my internet died half way through trying to review, so I had to wait for it to wake up before I could carry on *pout* Anyway...you know how I was rambling on about Shin and Nisse being so cute in the last two chapters? That's like, so true here again! How much cuteness can they get away with?? *snuggles them both* Awwww...they're so good together :D And Calle is still being a little bit evil...and a bit bitchy...but I reckon I can forgive him. Maybe. Possibly XD
So now that my internet is back...next chapter!! Unless you want me to stop spamming you for now...but I don't think I will :P *dashes off to next chapter*
Author's Response: *laughs* how annoying is that?! I'm so happy it came back on!
Oh, they can get away with loads of cuteness and we just keep coming back for more!
*laughs* he totally is, but yes, i think you can@
*flails* SPAM SPAM SPAM!!!!
Date: Feb 12, 2011 01:11:39 pm Title: Chapter 17
Haha, Shin's little fanboy flail over Garrett Hedlund was awesome XD And this chapter was just as cute (if not more so) as the last one! Though, I admit, I'm a little pissed at Calle being so determined to make Nisse like him...grrrrr!! *squishes Nisse* Hmm...I think poor Nisse is going to be flat by the time I've stopped squishing him XD Aaaand...now I have to stop reviewing for fifteen minutes while I make myself some food :P But I'll be back!!! *rushes off at lightning speed*
Author's Response: *laughs* well...I am obsessed, so it's only fair Shin is too!
*nods* me too, but Nisse is his own person, so i don't think he'll put up with it for too much longer!
*laughs* well, he's sort of already flat! he's VERYYYY skinny!
OM NOM NOM! Eat some for me!
Date: Feb 12, 2011 01:05:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
*squishy cuddles Nisse and Shin* They should totally be left in a room together...alone...with a bed O.O LOL. Excuse me this morning, I'm kinda hyper (which is weird, cause I'm usually hyper at night...hmmmm :S) Anyway, they're so cute! And Shin protecting Nisse was just the most awesome thing ever *squee* I know I've said this before, but I love their interactions, how they speak to each so carefully and maturely, yet they somehow make it so adorable at the same time XD It's awesome *happy sigh*
Aaaand....I'm off to the next chapter!! *spam spam spam with reviews ;)*
Author's Response: *laughs* they totally should be, and yes...that is a little wierd! but it must be because you're so excited to be reading!
*flails* they've been amazing to write!
Date: Feb 12, 2011 12:50:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
“Look at the butt,” He explained. “Their butt is too flat, even sitting down, to be a girls. It’s a guy.” That was absolutely brilliant! Being able to tell a gender by the shape of their butt...haha, I admit, I've done that one before ;) But still, that was hilarious XD
Shin's right...the guys are such arseholes in this chapter *sigh* But you can't make me hate Strify :P Nope...well, actually, your story "Love Virus" made me hate him, lol, but I don't think I can bring myself to hate him even a teeny bit again XD Even so, they are such dicks to him, and all he was doing was sitting there being his usual gorgeous self *pout*
Just out of curiosity, have you heard anything else from that girl? And is it just me that thinks there are some people on here that are a little too young, reading some of this stuff? I don't mean to cause offence (so if anyone happens to be reading this review and is younger than 16/17, I apologise and don't mean this to be a personal attack) but there are some really unsuitable stories on here for people younger than the age of consent. It worries me a little, because it got Tokio Hotel Fiction into trouble once, and it could quite easily happen here. Just a thought there. I know we have a rating system, but if the other members are anything like me, they just ignore it anyway (although I'm plenty old enough, so that doesn't make sense, lol). Still, they should really think about this properly before they join. CBFF isn't like THFF, whereby THFF is quite balanced in its Het and Slash stories, but the majority of CBFF stories are slash, so...yeah. I'll stop rambling now.
So, after all that...next chapter!
Author's Response: *laughs* me too!
And yes, they really are! LOL! I think Love Virus made me dislike him a lo bu never hate! *nods* i think they feel threatened!
*shakes head* No, she's like...disappeared! I agree that there are some people on here that are a little too young, reading some of this stuff? But I guess it's their decision to read it. I wouldn't have in my early teens, but...I guess I'm not "normal" . Hell, i was 16 when i read my first slash, and it wasn't...a particularily pleasant experience. *blush* i know the person who was responsible for that, it was an act of jealousy and anger because THF wouldn't affliate themseleves with the person's shitty forum *mind you, the OTHER person involved was kicked off ANOTHER forum, so what hope did they have?*
I think we should have a story locking system, like they do on forums.
*nods* that's an excellant point! *about there being more slash than het*
Date: Feb 12, 2011 12:40:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ewwie, Calle *shudder* I just wanted to grab Daisy and throw her out the window or something. I know, I'm so violent :P Lol, but seriously...she was irritating! And poor Nisse *cuddles him* They're already trying to change him, and it's quite clear that he doesn't want to be changed. But I spent most of this chapter thinking "DIE DAISY DIE!!" Or something like that XD
Next chapter!!! *zooooom*
Author's Response: *grins* Daisy makes EVERYONE violent!
*nods* Me too actually! it was very distracting! :P
Date: Feb 12, 2011 12:22:00 pm Title: Chapter 13
Cookies! Nom nom XD Hmm...I'm a little delayed in thieving the boys' cookies...but I'm gonna try anyway :P Lol! Anyway, Calle is a little...hmm...not sure how to put it. It's like, he wants to be everything to his brothers, if that makes sense, but something is stopping him from really taking over completely. You can see his pride in this chapter, stopping him from going to see Shin with the others, so I guess he still believes that it should just be the triplets together, and no-one else, right? Or completely wrong? LOL xD
Next chapter please! *takes cookies* Mwahaha XD
Author's Response: *laughs* Go ahead!
*nods* I think you're right, but i think that's stopping him is that he loves them too much to risk loosing them.
*nods* you are completely right (as always, with your twin-mind-reading powers!)
*hands you more cookies*
Date: Feb 12, 2011 12:16:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
SARAH!!! I am so sorry for not reviewing for ages! *hides* So to make up for it...I'm now going to spam you with reviews :P
Anyway, loved this part: God, it seemed like he spent three quarters of his life the colour of a stop sign. Made me laugh XD And of course, I loved the chapter as a whole. I mean, I've already read through it, but now I'm going to...you know...spam you with reviews XD Anyway! I'll stop being hyper and tell you that I love the interactions between Shin and Nisse here, the fact that they're getting on so well and that Shin is so attuned to how the triplets feel *gives Shin a squishy hug* I love him! ...Can I have him? I could steal him when Nisse isn't looking and put him back real quick? XD
Onto the next chapter!! *tacklehugs* Apologies for making you wait!! *zoom*
Author's Response: *hugs* it's Ok, Nikki! I understand, but i did miss your reviews!
*laughs* me too!
*flails* Spam away!!!! I like that too, Shin is very smart when it comes to the triplets!
*hands you Shin*
I think Nisse woudl track you down though, so...that's not a bad thing!
Date: Feb 04, 2011 01:54:59 pm Title: Chapter 29
T_T I'm trying not to cry. I am beyond sad to see this end, but it's a great story, and I'm glad you gave it some closure.
Author's Response: *hugs and snuggles* I'm sorry! But i am happy that you liked the story, and maybe i'll write a sequel!
Date: Feb 04, 2011 04:26:26 am Title: Chapter 29
The ending was cute! like the last part....i think that Nisse, Calle and Pelle are on a good road at the moment, and it'll be interesting to see where it takes them
Author's Response: Me too, I might write a sequel
Date: Feb 04, 2011 04:15:47 am Title: Chapter 29
Aw, this was so sweet and beautiful! i really liked it, but i still feel a little sorry for Calle!
Author's Response: So happy you liked it, and i feel sorry for him too but he needs to accept that Nisse is now happy!
Date: Feb 02, 2011 12:57:50 am Title: Chapter 29
I thought that this was so sad, but It was also very realistic, i'm sure that there are a lot of triplets and twins and quads and all the other multiples, who feel like this
Thank you for writing this final chapter
Author's Response: You are most welcome and i'm so glad you liked it! I even did research!
Date: Feb 01, 2011 11:31:30 am Title: Chapter 22
*le gasp* I cannot believe this! He kissed her?! How dare he? *glares at him* Poor Shin. I hope he'll be okay. *hugs him*
Darn! I can't read anymore 'cause I gotta go in school. That's so not fair!! *pouts*
Author's Response: *hugs* Awww! DANG! Don't worry, it'll still be here when you get back! Have a great day!!!!!
Date: Jan 30, 2011 01:36:37 pm Title: Chapter 29
I'm so happy that you wrote one more chapter but it's still sad that this is the end.
And after reading this chapter I decided it was time to find out who the tripplets actually are. Yes, I waited up until now to check them out, that's how slow I am. But they are cute, cute and cute:)
Well, what I wanted to say was: Det här är en underbar berättelse!
Author's Response: Hej, Jennie!
*nods* i definately agree, now it actually feels complete!
*giggles* really? Well...that's ok you waited this long, i'm just glad you like them!!!! :P
*hugs tightly* Tack så mycket! Jag är så glad att du gillade det, och tack för allt stöd!!!
From Sarah :P
Date: Jan 29, 2011 03:03:43 pm Title: Chapter 29
aww, that was cute *^^* i'm sad that this story is finished, but hey; i can start to read it again now!
Author's Response: *hugs tightly* Tack så mycket! I'm sad it's finished, but I am pleased that I now get to move on to a differet story, with another blond-haired, blue eyed Swede!!! *is in love*
Date: Jan 29, 2011 01:11:44 pm Title: Chapter 29
I LOVE IT SARAH!!!!
It's awesome!!!! ^-^!!! CALLE DON'T CRY!!!! Just because he looks different doesn't mean he still isn't Nisse.
You guys are the best set of siblings that I've read about and and ahahaha, the hair, it all comes back to the hair!!!
Once again I love it!!! I send my love!!!
Author's Response: Angelina, Tack så mycket!!! Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOO much! I am so happy that you liked it!
I agree, he's still the same Nisse on the inside.
*sniffle* I know right? I'll miss them, Hell, i'll probably have to write a sequel!
*hugs* Tack så mycket!!! THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:23:22 pm Title: Chapter 29
IT'S SO SWEEET AND LOVELY AND AMAZINGGGG!
Author's Response: *hugs* awwwwwwwwwwww! thank you so much! that means so much to me! YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 09:53:04 am Title: Chapter 28
"i like dick" haha, gotta love nisse's way of coming out xD
even though this was an AWESOME ending to the story, i reallyreallyreally want to read the coversation between them, please pretty please write it!
Author's Response: *laughs* well, he's a lot more....sublte when it comes to telling his brothers, i promise!
*hugs* the new chapter is up now!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 06:15:26 am Title: Chapter 28
Yeah...need a little something called "closure" here...and lol @ nisse's way of "letting her down gently" xD i was waiting for a jack sparrow moment. "not sure i deserved that..." lol
Author's Response: *nods* das will be written!
*laughs* that's awesome! it should so happen!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 03:44:29 am Title: Chapter 28
Ok girly, if you do not continue this story, for at least one more chapter, I will personally head your lynch mob....In other news, I love yooou! And, also, this is one of those stories that it took me forever to get around to reading, and then I fell in love....XD
Author's Response: *cowers* i will update, i promise!
Awwww! I love you too, my beautiful triplet *and miss you*
*flails happily* that just made my day!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:49:10 am Title: Chapter 27
Well, i guess that explains a lot!
I feel sorry for Shin and Marcel, but i am glad that Nisse has finally realised he's not the same as his brothers!
I don't want this story to end!
Author's Response: *sniffle* me either!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:47:27 am Title: Chapter 25
These songs were perfect for how each boy is feeling, and i like the fact that you made them both cinema bizarre songs rahter than some random singer
Poor Shin, i feel more sorry for him than nisse
Author's Response: *nods* I also feel more sorry for Shin than Nisse, because Nisse brought this whole thing upon himself
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:45:25 am Title: Chapter 13
I don't really like Calle, but i think that Pelle is a really sweet brother, just not sure who he wants to side with.
I think that Nisse and Shin will be good friends
Author's Response: I agree with everything you just said *happy smiley face*
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:38:25 am Title: Chapter 27
Awwww! I wish Shin really did have an identical twin! That'd be the cutest thing ever!
I thought it was sad but explains a lot!
Author's Response: *nods* i definately agree, but Strify having a twin would be even more awesome!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:20:18 am Title: Chapter 28
LOVE IT!!!!! *sing song voice*
haha, you used my family review!!!! ahahahaha, I believe you have done great with this story and your many other stories as well!!!!
And I would just LOVE to hear what Calle and Pelle would have to say about Shin and Nisse!!! especially Nisse's new look!!!
Love it again Sarah!!!
Author's Response: *flails happily*
*hugs* I told you that i would, it was an awesome review so it had to be incorporated in!
*nods* i'll be writing that in a moment!
*hugs* Thank you so much, Angelina!
Date: Jan 29, 2011 12:02:31 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so sad! But i still really enjoyed it, and it makes sense now why Shin was always pushing Nisse to be himself.
Personally, I don't mind the way it ended, at the moment. But of course, it's up to you
Author's Response: *hugs* I agree that it's sad!
*hugs* thank you!
Date: Jan 28, 2011 01:24:09 pm Title: Chapter 27
YES HIS HAIR!!!!! I hope she does accept it, and so far so good!!!!
NAWWWW SHINNIE!!!!! *Huggles Shin* You are defiantly amazing person!!!! and Nisse has started to deserve someone like you!!!!
And thank you Sara, you also have a beautiful name!!! and I LOVE the story
Author's Response: *flails* I know, it's so awesome! I'm pleased he finally had the guts to stand up for himself!
*nods happily* Yes, that he is!
Awww! *hugs* Tack så mycket!!!
Date: Jan 28, 2011 12:15:51 pm Title: Chapter 27
meh kinda saw that coming...the shin-twin thing...but lol @ mom blaring in swedish and nisse translating for shin. i probably wouldn't have played it so cool but meh...-shrug- still entertaining! :D
Author's Response: *laughs* Yeah, i think...i'm not exactly good at surprises!!!
*grins* I'm not sure whether i would have been able to be so calm, but still! Glad you liked it!
Date: Jan 28, 2011 08:07:00 am Title: Chapter 26
Dude srsly I felt like if they didn't quit squabbling I was gonna give up on this story, so thank you for that! now nisse just needs to clean up the mess he made ~_~;; messymessymessy...
Author's Response: *laughs* I felt like that too, and wouldn't that be bad, since i'm the author? LMAO!!!
Date: Jan 28, 2011 02:25:30 am Title: Chapter 26
It's great, i'm really enjoying it! I'll be sad when it's over, but other than that, it's good!
What's he going to do with the dye?!
Author's Response: *laughs* You know, somehow i think he's going to dye his hair with it! Nah, you'll just have to wait and see!!! But i'm sad to see it end as well
Date: Jan 28, 2011 01:40:25 am Title: Chapter 26
Nawwwww!!! ok, step one complete: Apologize to Shin and he has to accept the apology!! Step two; in progress: Show who you really are!!! Step three: Get rid of girlfriend!!!
Love it Sarah!!!
Author's Response: *claps happily* Oh, i love that!!!! It truly is like Nisse is working in steps at the moment!!! Tack så mycket, Angelina! (which is SUCH a pretty name by the way)
Date: Jan 28, 2011 01:10:41 am Title: Chapter 26
I think it is written perfectly. This is how you wrote it, so this is how it is meant to be written. Sometimes if you try to lengthen the plot out it gets broing 'cause it;s taking too long for something to happen.
"Let’s go back to hugging" that was so cute ^_^
Author's Response: *is super pleased* Oh, thank you so much!!! You are right actually,about it being as it was meant to be written and i didn't think of it becoming boring, so it's lucky I have you to remind me, dearest!
*laughs* I thought it was too! They're so tempermental though!!! :D
Date: Jan 27, 2011 07:59:56 am Title: Chapter 25
ZOMG how long is this ice storm gonna be dragged out xD we're gonna be buried in icicles! btw adding songs isn't really cheating if it helps to further enhance the main idea of your writing. -smacks chibi owl with thesaurus-
Author's Response: *le sigh* Hopefully soon it will end!!!
Oh yay! That's great news, now i can stop worrying about the writing Gods smiting me with their sticks! Whoot Whoot!!!
Date: Jan 27, 2011 03:08:28 am Title: Chapter 25
OMG!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!
I'm sorry Nisse but, HA YOU GOT WHAT YOU DESERVE!!!!! Now you will feel the pain that Shin has been feeling!!!! YOU BETTER GET YOUR MAN BEFORE YOU SCREW ANYTHING ELSE UP!!!!! that is if he will have you, but you can change everything with one single motion very kissing him in front of everyone and not care for what anyone has to say and to get rid of that 'girlfriend' of yours!!!!
Once I again I love it!!!!
Author's Response: *hugs* Awww, thank you!!!
*laughs* He so did, didn't he?! I think he will eventually man up; but it'll take a while!
*flails* Oh, that's a great idea!!!!
Date: Jan 25, 2011 03:10:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
oh, i'd like it if they moved to norway too! and (not to critizise or anything), but i'd say that what they speak in denmark is more similar to swedish than what they speak in holland, 'cause in all honesty i can't understand one single word dutch, but danish is easy shit n_n anywho, great chapter! though i feel sorry for nisse for having to kiss that... girl, poor guy, i really want him with shin :(
Author's Response: *nods and blushes* Whoops! I knew it was a European country starting with "D" Thank you!!!!
Thank you! I am pleased that you liked it! I feel sorry for him too! It puts a real sour taste in your mouth, when you think he's kissing her while he SHOULD be kissing Shin!
Date: Jan 25, 2011 11:09:05 am Title: Chapter 23
oh... i really like Anna May's personality...but poor Shin...and poor Nisse for being confused...ha i love this story so much...yay.. :P luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: *laughs* I do too, i think! *sighs* Nisse is always confused!
*bounces* Brilliant! I am glad you are enjoying it!
Date: Jan 25, 2011 11:03:15 am Title: Chapter 22
hmm...a new girl...how cute i love her name and the pun that goes with it...hehe...and yes google translate is a brilliant...hehe...luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: *grins* thanks! I liked the pun too :P
*smiles* It's one of my favourite things online!
Date: Jan 25, 2011 10:51:16 am Title: Chapter 21
hehe...i like this story soo much...hmm i love your picture manipulation...brilliant....hehe...well i must keep reading now :p luv kasumi xoxox
Author's Response: *hugs* awww, thank you so much!
Date: Jan 25, 2011 09:15:47 am Title: Chapter 24
Nawww!!!!! Nisse, don't you dare lose Shin!!! He helped you on ore than one occasion!!! He got you to realize that you and your siblings are not one person and you all have your different strengths and weaknesses!!! You are different!!!
I already don't like this girl!!! Gahhhh!!!!! I feel sorry for Shin :*(!!!!
I love it and I love you (as a writer and friend) Keep writing!!!
Author's Response: *flails* I know!!!! *screeches at Nisse!*
*nods* I don't like her either! I feel sorry for him too, but maybe they're not meant to be together!
*snuggles* awww, i love you too, as a reviewer, amazing person and a fan! *hugs* I just emailed you, i hope that's alright!
Date: Jan 24, 2011 08:25:39 pm Title: Chapter 23
I think Nisse needs to tell his brothers off; They're really annoying me. But it's good :)
Author's Response: *nods* I definately agree! Who knows, maybe he will!
*hugs* thank you! I am glad that you like it :D
Date: Jan 24, 2011 07:00:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
Hello there. I really like this story, you write so good. Though it makes me a bit sad to know that its soon to be ended.
Just as some other people here I could help you with your swedish if you wanted since its my motherstoungh.
Anyways, I hope you make a nice ending for Shin(and Nisse, but he shouldn't mess around with that girl, so right now he gets to be in this oval bubble so he can think over what he done) :P
Author's Response: *hugs* Hello! Tack så mycket!!! *hehe! I like saying that- so i hope i'm saying it correctly!*
Anyway, thank you so much, I am so pleased that you are enjoying it, but I am also sad that it will be ending soon! But don't worry, I'll be working on a new story soon!
Oh, that would be positively WONDERFUL! When i read that you are Swedish, that just made me squeal! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
*sly wink* Don't worry, it will be a nice ending, i promise!
I just emailed you, i hope that's alright!
once again, tack så mycket
From a VERY happy Sarah
Date: Jan 24, 2011 06:14:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Hello, I have read all the chapters on this story and I love it and I'm really looking forward to read the next chapters.
I'm from sweden so if you ever need help with the language then you can always ask me and I will do my best to help you.
I have a few corrections about what you wrote in swedish if you are interested. i assume that you meant to say "hey guys" when you wrote "hej killar" which directly translated into english will be "hey boys". So if you are not only directing yourself to boys you can just say Hej or "hej allihopa", which is "hey everyone".
Then I saw that someone already commented on the fact that it is "lära mig svenska" instead of "lära sig svenska" and I just wanted to say that's correct swedish.
you also wrote "så jag bestämde mig för att sätta detta på svenska", instead you could write "jag bestämde mig för att skriva detta på svenska", which in english is "I decided to write this in swedish".
I hope that this will help you with learning swedish, I think that you are doing a really good job so far, and remember that you can ask me if you ever need help:)
Keep up the good work! I really look forward to read your stories.
Author's Response: *hugs* awww, that makes me so happy! I'm glad that you are enjoying it!
When i found out that you were from Sweden, i started to bounce up and down! I really want to go there one day!!!
You know, for once, when someone has corrected me on another language other than english, I don't feel embaressed! I am so grateful to you for correcting me! Tack så mycket!!!!!
*blush* I just emailed you, i hope that's ok!
*hugs* Tack så mycket!!!! It means a lot to me to get AWESOME reviews like this one!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
From a totally happy Sarah