Date: Sep 03, 2010 12:31:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! That was one of the most beautiful and honest stories I've ever read in my life.
I haven't leave you a review in those two chapters before 'cause I was so confused and I didn't know what were you talking about, I still don't understand it quite but it's okay. *smiles*
Also, I am so sorry for the loss! I didn't lost anybody who meant a world to me so I don't know how it feels. I hope that I'll die before that happens 'cause I don't know how will I handle it.
There are a lot of people on this world that I love and care about and don't want EVER to lose, but I don't know what tomorrow brings. I'll just keep prying that they'll be okay.
I don't know what it was in this story but the last chapter reminded me of my ex- boyfriend, the only boyfriend I ever had. Though there was nothing you put in that we did together or whatever, I just... I guess he just means a lot to me, 'cause I was imagining him crossing the road and that the truck almost hit him but, I stepped in front of him and saved his life by pushing him aside so... the truck hit me and I was dead right then and there.
I don't know what it means, probably that I'm still not over him...
So, please don't delete the last chapter 'cause it was amazing and incredible.
*hugs you tightly*
Author's Response: *wide eyes* oh, I hope you weren’t too confused. Would you like me to explain it to you? *hugs*
I hope I die before it happens to me too, because I don’t know how I would handle it either. I would love that person with my everything but the loss I would feel…I’m not sure I would be able to cope.
I do the same, and I always say “I love you” to whoever I talk to (family) on the phone, or visits, or email. Because as you said, you never know.
*hugs* OH HONEY!!! That is so sad, It made me get tears in my eyes. I think it means that you’d be willing to do anything for him, just so he didn’t have to suffer an ounce of pain or sadness (so yes, that you’re not over him)
*hugs you tightly back* I won’t delete it then
Date: Sep 03, 2010 06:00:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god, i had tears in my eyes even while reading the summery. this story is so realistic and sad, it made me cry the whole way through. i'm a little apprehensive to read the rest
Author's Response: i think it'll be worth it, Lauren
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:56:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Sarah, your breakup with taren was just as devestating for you, but i think that this IS a little more important. i think that the man you speak of understands that everyone is supporting him and i am sure that his wife would have loved it too.
i think tha it's brave of you to write this, but also a good way to vent. it made me cry so much
Author's Response: *hugs* thank you Amy, so much.
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:54:56 am Title: Chapter 2
*sobs* imagine knowing this was your final night together, it made me so sad.
(quote)“I love you, I love you so much,” you sob, clutching onto my shirt. “I will always be with you. I am trying so…so…so hard to fight. Please don’t leave me. Not tonight.”(end quote)
that was it, i was sobbing. Mum came in and asked me what was wrong and i was like "sarah...story...the...and...dead...and...sad..."
and she was like "oh?" *wtf look*
Author's Response: LOL whoops
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:53:01 am Title: Chapter 1
(quote)Maybe they relent, feeling nothing but pity
Pity is all I receive nowadays
Maybe I walk back, heart pounding. How could I leave you?
I must…must be with you all the time
You’re lying back in the same bed, a private room overflowing with flowers
But their sweet sent cannot chase away the scent of fear
Or sadness(end quote)
this part was so sad, it made me begin to cry...but those last few parts about "maybe it's dawn, maybe it's the middle of the night or maybe it's daylight" broke me down even further...
...this is just heartbreaking
Author's Response: *sobs and hugs Amy* i'm sorry
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:49:46 am Title: Chapter 3
*hugs8 i know how you're feeling, but i think that writing this story will help you get over the shock. i think that you put a lot into all your friendships, real and online, and that's why this is affecting you as much as it has. Again, you made me cry, but i think that this is an amazing heartfelt story. he'll be ok, i'm sure of it and his wife will be remmebered forever
Author's Response: *hugs* thank you so much Shaelyn. you just made it all ok :)
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:48:08 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh god...now i'm sobbing. this story is just heartwrenching. i...that...it is just...NO WORDS
(quote)It’s hitting me harder and harder with each day, each rasping breath.
I feel so angry, so desperate. I can’t believe it’s nearly over and there’s nothing I can do to help you. You are my love, the one person who gave me their everything and now, I’m watching you waste away.
I crawl in next to you.
That made me cry harder...it's so sad
Author's Response: *hugs you hard* sorry Shaelyn
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:14:29 am Title: Chapter 1
i think this chapter is so sad. I can't even begin to imagine how horrible that dream must have been
but...it's even worse to remember that this is about one of your friends. it made me cry so hard.
Author's Response: *hugs* sorry i made you cry Josie!
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:05:32 am Title: Chapter 3
well, while it's up here, i would just like to say that i thought it was beautiful and heartfelt and he will love it no matter what.
you are so deep it's scary sometimes. Remember at school when the teachers would question your mental health because you wrote with such truth? you put everything into your stories, but sometimes it's too much to ask of yourself.
promise me sarah that you'll be ok? you won't let this affect you too much?
Author's Response: Jessica, i promise you that i will be ok. I won't think too much into this, or dwell on it. I'm just going to give him whatever support i can.
Date: Sep 03, 2010 05:02:16 am Title: Chapter 1
So much about this made me cry. I remember last night, when you told me. I knew the minute you said his name that something was wrong.
*quote*Maybe you’ll stare out the window in desperation,
Memorizing the scenery
With the fever
Of a dying
Or maybe you’ll chatter away with nervousness, anything to fill those yawning gaps
Of scared silence
this was so emotional and desperate. i just...feel all of the strange tangle of emotions you have described.
i dont think you're being disrespectful, and i think perhaps he would appreciate it...maybe?
Author's Response: *hugs* that's because you're such an amazing sister!
i liked that bit too, i thought it was sad
*hugs* thank you
Date: Sep 03, 2010 04:26:53 am Title: Chapter 2
"“I love you, I love you so much,” you sob, clutching onto my shirt. “I will always be with you. I am trying so…so…so hard to fight. Please don’t leave me. Not tonight.”"
...You ...i dont even have words.
Author's Response: wahhhh, now i'm bawling again! I'm sorry Loren!!!!!
Date: Sep 03, 2010 04:25:11 am Title: Chapter 1
"Maybe that ache will begin again, The pleading, whispered promises of everything I could give
If you would just
Oh My God.
Author's Response: *hugs* i'm sorry Loren!!! That part made me cry too, i just...it must be hard, trying everything you can to make them better. Promising everything under the sun in one last attempt to make it ok