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Reviewer: RoseJStar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2010 05:00:35 am Title: 9-Torture.

Hmm... would it be Ashley? Or Jake? Possibly Sandra?
Or is it someone from Tokio Hotel? Maybe Gustav or Georg?

Eh... too many guesses...
but I have to say someone from BVB... :3
Possibly Ashley... ^^

Good stories by the way(:

Author's Response: Hahaa, yes its Ash :)

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:32:00 am Title: 9-Torture.

Yu!

and the other person is Shin

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:31:20 am Title: 8-Detest.

Oh no...who is this?!

Um...well...it is either Yu or Ashley.

so i htink i'll go ashley

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:30:37 am Title: 7-Addicted.

Jinxx from black veil brides

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:29:55 am Title: 6-Everything.

Tom kaulitz cause Bill is his little brother

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:29:00 am Title: 5-Freedom.

Oh i feel smart. i guessed right!

I think this is...um...Yu or someone

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:28:07 am Title: 4-Perfect.

This sounds liek Luminor i think. Or Bill kaulitz, but i put him as the last chapter so i'm not sure

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:27:24 am Title: 3-Inncocent.

Um...i don't know who this is.

I think it's strify or Bill Kaulitz

Author's Response: Strify :)

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:26:54 am Title: 2-Phase.

Romeo? i think this one is Romeo

Author's Response: *nods*

Reviewer: Mizuki Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2010 08:26:38 am Title: 1-Disguise.

This is Shin right?

He has this description. but...he doesn't have extensions i don't think. maybe it's not him...who has extentions?

I'vr seen kiro with those black extentions but maybe strify wears extensions too?

maybe kiro then

Author's Response: Kiro :)

Reviewer: Leelu Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2010 10:47:07 am Title: 8-Detest.

Oh wow! i really liked this chapter!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank youu ^_^

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2010 05:20:01 pm Title: 9-Torture.

If i go by what you said about de-listing the names, all that is left is Ashley

Plus, Shin has been in two

Author's Response: *nods*

Reviewer: Lauren Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2010 12:37:17 pm Title: 8-Detest.

i think maybe it's Tom Kaulitz...but i don't know for sure

Author's Response: ^.^

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2010 12:08:11 pm Title: 8-Detest.

*blushes* sorry about that! i couldn't work it out so i guessed the three. i think that each person is like the character!!!

Now onto this chapter.

Tom?! It sounds like Tom!!!

excellant point. if you're going to hell, why not make it worse. you've got nothing to loose and eternal damnation in the deepest circle of Hell to gain.

OH NO...second to last?! NEIN!!!!!

Of course you are, honey. You're super talented and we all adore you

Author's Response: Thanks hun ^_^

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2010 12:14:26 am Title: 7-Addicted.

I honestly can't guess this one? Unless it's Lumi?

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2010 12:11:39 am Title: 6-Everything.

Tommi!!!

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2010 02:26:27 pm Title: 7-Addicted.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Yu or Jinxx...OR Tom

Author's Response: Hahaa good guess xD

Reviewer: maria_bizarre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2010 09:17:50 pm Title: 6-Everything.

I think it's Tom. And I'm seriously not sure. But whatever...

"It was just a peck on the lips but mum saw it and got mad, so we never did it in front of her again, but we still did."-- hah! I loved that line!! Perfect!! *huggle snuggle*

Author's Response: ^_^

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2010 02:47:38 pm Title: 6-Everything.

I'm rather confused. Originally, i thought it was Tom. it made sense, but when i re-read it, Bill is not 2 years younger. Now i am thinking it's either Ashley or Jinxx.

though, now that you have said it, chapter 5 DOES sound like Andy

Question....didn't we already do Shin? i don't remember a Kiro chapter yet?

Author's Response: Yeah I got confuse with the Diguise one, that one was Kiro, but for some reason I kept thinking it was Shin, probably because he is the the most obvious for it to be...But yeah, Shin has not been done yet.

Author's Response: Yeah I got confuse with the Diguise one, that one was Kiro, but for some reason I kept thinking it was Shin, probably because he is the the most obvious for it to be...But yeah, Shin has not been done yet.

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2010 01:48:41 am Title: 5-Freedom.

AH! I'm guessing it's our little ShinieBooo? :(



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: 3r1nSh4y Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2010 12:25:07 am Title: 5-Freedom.

it's YU!!!



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: -hrhr- Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 10:45:40 pm Title: 5-Freedom.

this is Yu I have the feeling that is Yu... Because i never imagined Shin doing drugs... It would be weird. So... Really hope it's yu! ^^

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: maria_bizarre Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 08:59:18 pm Title: 5-Freedom.

okay, I don't know this one. I really can't assume anyone. *pouts* I think it's Yu. *shifty eyes*

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 03:18:59 pm Title: 4-Perfect.

This make me think of Bill Kaulitz, he's so skinny. But also Strify...



Author's Response: Luminor :)

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 02:45:28 pm Title: 3-Inncocent.

This one is def. Strify. And Tokio Hotel please??? I like both bands, but Tokio Hotel is better ^_^



Author's Response: *Nods*

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 02:34:34 pm Title: 2-Phase.

It's Strify...



Author's Response: Ahh lol, sorry on your last review i didn't realise it was for the first chapter xD ...Yes it was Kiro. *Shakes head*, not Strify

Reviewer: xxBizarrebabyxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 02:24:38 pm Title: 1-Disguise.

Kiro?

Great story bytheway :) I really like it.



Author's Response: Kiro's already been done. Thank youu ^^

Reviewer: maria_bizarre Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 08:47:35 pm Title: 4-Perfect.

*pouts* I haven't guessed the first one. I said it was Shin and you said it was Kiro. But that's fine. I guessed Strify and Romi. *smiles* Yay me!!! *claps*

I think this is Shin, but I'm not sure since you said that there will be BVB and TH. But I'll stick to Shin. *fingers crossed* And poor who ever this is. *tacklehugs*

Author's Response: Yeah I know, I made a mistake, my bad.

Reviewer: 3r1nSh4y Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 06:30:45 pm Title: 4-Perfect.

Lumi!!!!!



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: -hrhr- Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 02:17:12 pm Title: 4-Perfect.

Let's see~ this might be either Shin or Luminor. They are the only ones I could think of oh and, I'm happy you're gonna do the Tokio Hotel and BVB thingy ^___^ *squeak*

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 01:35:30 pm Title: 4-Perfect.

I feel so smart, but i'll probably get this one wrong >.< i think it's Luminor, because it doesn't sound like something Yu would do.

Also, it MAY be Bill Kaulitz

Author's Response: ^.^

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 03:14:43 am Title: 3-Inncocent.

I think this one is Strify...it sounds like something he would do.

i htought this was a little sad, but i also thought it was a LOT sexy

Author's Response: Haha yeahh i feel the samee.

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 03:13:47 am Title: 2-Phase.

First of all; i really enjoyed this chapter t was so heartbreaking.

Second...i think it's Romeo. He wears sweatbands a lot and it just...sounds like him

Author's Response: ^^

Reviewer: CinemaHotel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2010 12:57:22 pm Title: 3-Inncocent.

This one just about breaks my heart...

Author's Response: I know..

Reviewer: CinemaHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2010 12:52:10 pm Title: 2-Phase.

Owies. ;(

Author's Response: Mhmm :(

Reviewer: maria_bizarre Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2010 10:12:41 am Title: 3-Inncocent.

Strify? Okay, you REALLY got me clueless this time. xD

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! Yaaaay!!!!!! I guessed right!!!!!!!!!!!!! *tacklehugs*

Author's Response: ^O^

Reviewer: maria_bizarre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2010 10:03:28 am Title: 2-Phase.

Okay, I dun't know but the moment I saw word razor, I thought about Romeo. I dunno why, trust me. So my guess is- Romi.

P.S.- I like this chapter too. *hugs who ever this is*

Author's Response: God your good at this xD

Author's Response: God your good at this xD

Reviewer: 3r1nSh4y Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2010 07:43:44 am Title: 3-Inncocent.

Shin and Strify!!!!



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: -hrhr- Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2010 07:42:50 am Title: 3-Inncocent.

Hyuu~Hyuu! *.* Me liked this meh this story is my mind exercise hehe. This time I really think it's Strify. [pwease be Strify *prays*]. Anyhow about the chapter end notes, Tokio Hotel and BVB are always good welcomed in CB stories I think.
Can't wait for the nexty~!


Author's Response: Your prayers may answered ;)

Reviewer: -hrhr- Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2010 10:24:33 pm Title: 2-Phase.

I don't know... Either Yu or Strify... Or maybe Bill Kaulitz... Hmmm is so hard to guess, but we won't know until you post the next, so hurry up with it! ;)

Author's Response: Haha I will post it soon ^^

Reviewer: x_roxana_x Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2010 09:04:05 pm Title: 2-Phase.

from the first row i imagined strify doing it and while i kept reading...i can`t get rid of this image i have in my head
hope i guessed right :))

Author's Response: You shall find out soon ^^

Reviewer: 3r1nSh4y Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2010 08:57:02 pm Title: 2-Phase.

Its either Yu or Shin, i cant decide!!



Author's Response: You shall find out :)

Reviewer: maria_bizarre Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2010 12:53:20 pm Title: 1-Disguise.

Is it... Shin?
He or Lumi, 'cause they have long legs. *giggles*

Well, I still like it. I'm sure I'm going to read another part of it. Lol!

Author's Response: Woo, you guessed right! It was Shin ^^

Reviewer: 3r1nSh4y Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2010 07:11:34 pm Title: 1-Disguise.

It's Shin!!!!! great chapter, cant wait for more!



Author's Response: >.> can't tell you yet. Thank youu ^^

Reviewer: CinemaHotel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2010 12:44:52 pm Title: 1-Disguise.

*hugs*
I adore this. It's very beautiful.
xx

Author's Response: Thank youu ^^ xx

Reviewer: Rah-Rah Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2010 12:06:45 pm Title: 1-Disguise.

*hugs* you are most welcome for the banner because i TOTALLY ADORE THIS FANFICTION!!!!

Personally, i think this is Shin. I love the way it's written (and the way the word disguise is written in italics.

AWWWWWWWWW, Bill is awesome then!!! *hugs him*

Ohhhh, i can't wait til the next chapter is updated

Author's Response: Thank you my dear. Yeahh Bill is awesome *Joins hug* annd, your just going to have to find out.

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