Date: Jan 30, 2011 10:21:13 pm Title: Chapter 20
i cried strify lost everything and everyone he had
Author's Response: *hugs* I'm sorry cried! Nikko Shiro wrote a story for me, based on this one. It's how Strify copes after Shin and Kali die. Perhaps you would like to read it? It's called "Twenty-three days"
Date: Aug 02, 2010 03:09:28 pm Title: Chapter 20
YOU KILLED THEM ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! *groans* Well, except Strify... But you made him crazy!!!!! Oh God, oh God, oh God........ *sigh*
You killed Shin... *wispers* I understand, I guess. *sobs silently*
I just, woooooooooooooow!!!!!!!! I hope that's good enough. I REALLY do not know what to say. I didn't expect anything of this to happen'. ANYTHING!!!!!! And you still did. Gosh, you're absolutely amazing!!
I think I'll just go insane like Strify did. xD Maybe, I'll understand you much more!! xD
Now, I'm just rambling. Ehh...
You wrote the word 'love'!!!!!!!!! Oh my God!!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy!!! (if you've explained that in invu I wouldn't know it 'cause I haven't read it yet and I keep dying with suspence to do so.)
YAY FO DENY IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love that story!!!!!
Umm... well, amazing story, and I'll just go and read INVU 'cause- I MUST!!! Bye-bye!! *tacklehugs*
Also, this story sent my mind away from something 'cause it didn't had love "ingredients" in. Thank you very much for that!!! Else, I would probably cry... Oh well... *waves*
Author's Response: *hugs* strify being insane will be a good thing. It means he can be with Shin *sad smile*
Yes, Iím sorry about that. *hugs*
AWWWW THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! Iím glad that you liked it though!
*shakes head frantically* Oh please! You donít have to go insane to understand me! *hugs*
Iíll be honest, having you notice I said ďloveĒ just made me cry! It meant so much to me to have someone notice so thank you from the bottom of my heart.
*giggles* then you should read INVU! It has a much better ending!
*hugs* I like it too!!!! Itís a good story ( I think)
Bye-bye Hon!! *tacklehugs and smiles*
P.s. AWWW honey! do you want to Facebook message me what it is? *hugs*
Date: Aug 02, 2010 02:37:16 pm Title: Chapter 18
STRIFY!!!!!! I seriously thought he's going to die there!! Jesus Christ!! I can't believe it! Oh man...
Wow!! Shin hit him? Okay...
I'll just go and read another chapter, I just can't WAIT to see what happens!
P.S.-- Yay for them making up!!
Author's Response: *hugs* Strify's strong! he'll survive!!! AND YES YAY FOR MAKING UP!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jul 27, 2010 08:07:03 pm Title: Chapter 20
That was amazing,
And although i already knew what was going to happen, i loved it all the same.
Thankyou for a brilliant story my lieve, and *snuggles* JUST YAY.
So.. i guess this is the last review i will ever leave for you here.. How wierd!
Lets make it a good 'en. *snicker*
I haven't actually got anything to say, 4 days in a house are, kinda, depressing. *eye roll*
But, what can you do? *snuggles*
LOVEEEE YOU. LIEEEEEBEE DU
Author's Response: I know..it's kinda sad actually! i dont want the story to finish in a sense!!! :(
*laughs* yes, they are!!!
i *heart* you too
Date: Jul 27, 2010 04:20:42 pm Title: Chapter 20
Holy shit..... I... I have no idea what to say. I... I want to go back and read it again, because I feel like it hasn't sunk in yet....
Shin killed Kali, then killed himself.... Strify completely lost it at the end....
Damn. Excellent job, darling. This story is just wonderful. A perfect example of why I read fanfiction in the first place.
Author's Response: *hugs* awwwwwwwwwww....that's kinda how i felt writing it, if that makes sense!
THANK YOU SO MUCH, HONEY!!! *hugs and blushes* oh, that's so lovely!!! thank you so much
Date: Jul 27, 2010 12:30:29 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh my god! maybe i should stop believing you when you say you're not going to hurt someone!!!
Poor Strify. i would go insane too if i had lost the 2 people i loved in one day.
i have no words to express the awesomeness of this. this has to be one of the best endings i have ever read!!!
I bow to you, you are amazing
Author's Response: *giggle* i think you all shouldn't believe me, but hten that makes me sad!!!!
me too :(
*hugs* thank you, so are you
Date: Jul 27, 2010 11:55:45 am Title: Chapter 20
Hells yeah! I love the ending! That was definitely worth the wait, honestly, it was so awesome, and so well written, and tense and...and I'm going insane too! xD Hang on, I will return in about two minutes *rushes off to read chapter again* Okay, okay, back :D Anyway, so, first how he couldn't take his eyes off the body, I take that as in death, Shin suddenly commands all of his attention in a way he never had before. Like, all of sudden, he IS someone now that he's dead. And of course, that's terrible, but in the end, it looks like Shin got he wanted. You know? It's horrible that a person like Shin can only achieve such a thing when he's gone, but to immerse that into this story was genius. I loved it xD And I would completely sympathise with Shin...had he not killed Kali.
So, second, *goes back to chapter again* this bit:
“Shit, you must have been so fucking conflicted,” he whispered. “I was so mad at you for killing James; but I know now it was an accident. I remember you telling me how much you hated yourself when he died. Shin…Why did you do this?”
“Because he was insane,” the man replied “Because he didn’t have any where to escape too and he was very troubled…”
That was great, how Strify is talking to Shin, but it's not Shin that responds, and it's also clearly not what he wants to hear. And of course, Strify thinks it's all his fault, thinks Shin is dead because of him, and I think it's there that you can slowly start to see Strify's mind unravelling. The only thing keeping him going is Kali, but then *BOOM* SHE'S DEAD!!!
"He began to laugh; feeling all the stitches he had made over the years to mask his own demons; feeling them all unravel and bleed on the inside." I think that, in the end, the biggest demon of all is one's own mind. Because ultimately, that's what tears Strify apart. Which is fantastic. Really, truly amazing, because that is precisely the ending I wanted, this sink into insanity (which I agree is a much better interpretation of what happens to him) and that the mind IS fragile, that it can come undone at the slightest moment, and can be destroyed by the simplest of things. This chain reaction, from Shin's death to Kali's, was so perfectly portrayed, and it was truly amazing to see it all come to the end that I was hoping for was incredible.
“No I mean it, well done to him! I’d applaud but everyone seems a little on edge so I wouldn’t want to startle them, but hey, didn’t he look peaceful swinging in the wind like that? It’s a shame he didn’t have like, a ball gown or something to wear, that would have made for a much more striking visual effect, although it might have been a little clichťd, and I kind of think Shin wouldn’t like to seem clichťd, so maybe dying in his bloody clothes was okay with him” That was the best crazy rant ever!! I adored that little speech, and his whole "visual effect" notion was both strangely funny and deeply disturbing. Which is just awesome, cause it means you, once again, did a fantastic job with this story!!
WOW this is a long review...I'm just trying to get everything in xD This bit: "…and like Kali had when she fell from the top of a building four years ago; beginning the start and the end of her life…" I liked, because I think the subtle implication there is that it was in fact STRIFY who wound up destroying her life. Had he not slept with her, left her (even though he didn't have a choice in the matter), and then attempted to reconcile, none of this would ever have happened. So, yeah, I love how you implied that it was, in the end, all Strify's fault that this happened. That was great xD
Okay. I think I'm done now!! So, I don't think I need to say this again, cause I'm sure you already know, but I loved this story, and the ending was just breathtaking. To read it, to see it unravel, was brilliant. It was both fluid and broken, so like that descent into Strify's mind as he gradually collapses in on himself...and then, I love how he ends up like a child at the end, having someone hold his hands and try to bring him back from the darkness...so awesome xD But hey, I was wondering if you would consider perhaps writing a one-shot sequel to this, maybe giving a little detail as to what happens to Strify after all this. It doesn't have to be very long xD And you don't have to write one, lol. It's just that I, personally, would like to see what you would do with this character if you were to continue his story. I know where I would take it, but I'd love to see it from you xD That sounds terrible. That sounds like I'm being all snooty and pompous and stuff. I'm not! I promise xD LOL, I just love to see new stories from you, and I think that this character would be a very interesting one to develop, even if it was only a one shot. What can I say? I like crazy characters xD
Anyway, that's all for now! This was a great ending, and an awesome story, and I look forward to reading the next installment in any and all of your stories! So, I'll leave you to marvel at how long this review is xD Because I'm just THAT awesome (LOL). Haha, anyway, *hugs* *fangirl squeal*, you did a great job, and I'll see you later!! This is Nikki, over and out. *crazy...very crazy* XD
Date: Jul 27, 2010 11:53:25 am Title: Chapter 20
o.o ....GAHHHHH! YOU SAID YOU YOULD NEVER HURT KALI!!! OMG!..YOU LIED TO MEEE!!
When Shin died I'm like nooo.*Gasps* I was shocked, even forgot to breath, I felt my eyes watering...When Kali died It was more shocking.... but I always liked Shin better...it was only shocking 'cause you said you would'nt hurt her! Eeeeep.
*Hugs Strify and never lets go* Poor Strife! He lost everything and everyone D:
This has been probably one of the best shocking stories on here.
Author's Response: *hugs* I'm SORRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eeek, forgetting to breathe is BAD!!!!
Ah, yes...that would be a good reason for shocking you, so i do apoligise!
I know! it's really sad to think he has
*hugs* thank you so much, Dani
Date: Jul 27, 2010 11:51:01 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh my GOD...great story and the way i see it is that Shin got what he wanted,which was Strify to slip away into madness so he was forever with Shin inside his mind finally being his.
I'm so sad that it's over, but it was breathtaking and so excellant, perfect and spellbinding.
Author's Response: Oh Amy thank you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jul 27, 2010 09:35:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Y-Y-Y-Y-YOU TOLD SHIN.
You just signed my death warrent! xD
And i would have to run away from rapist shin, unless he had boobs and a penis causee id just laugh *smirk*
Anyhow, eddie cullen aint hot, so how can gackt NOT be hotter, Gackt is just phitttt =)
Author's Response: *hugs* I'm sorry *hugs tightly and protects*
Well....yeah, Edward looks like a foot....but still Gackt looks like a japanese version in one of his music videos
Date: Jul 26, 2010 09:29:33 pm Title: Chapter 19
*flailing* AHdsijafkljhgilsdjw again, ytou've left me speechless... Hly crap.k fsnakfljjklsajfdsk;
There needs to be another chapter. Like, now. Yup.
You've turned me into an addict, and I don't know whether to love you or hate you for it. Probably love.
Author's Response: *laughs* i think...it should be love too!!! *hugs*
*hugs* i'm just updating now!!!
Date: Jul 26, 2010 09:20:02 pm Title: Chapter 17
You know what? I like masculine-Strify. There's a vibe to his relationship with Kali that I don't see when he's with a guy (even if he is the dominate one in the relationship). Maybe it's just me...
But I'm excited that this is almost over (not because I want it to be over, but because I want to know how it ends). I adore this story, and I can't wait for a new chapter.
I also can't wait for new chapters of Deny It! and for the new story Driftwood. ^_^
Author's Response: *nods* that is so true!!!!
*hugs* i understand! i'm like that too, while writing it!!!
*bounces happily* YAY YAY YAY
Date: Jul 26, 2010 08:01:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Another cliffhanger! You're so mean!! XD No, not really, I love cliffhangers. I love anticipating the ending...and I'm not going to go on and on about what could happen, because I'm going to let you unfold this last part of the story for us :D I really adore this story, and although I'm sad that it's ending, I enjoyed every minute of it. I did guess that Shin had killed Strify and Kali's son, but to see it being written out, slowly brought to the light, and culminating in Strify's realisation, was still awe-inspiring. My heart was pounding with each word that I read, and it will continue to do so long after this story has finished. So, with much love and support, I leave you with the desperation to read the final installment in this epic xD I can't wait!
And now, I'm off to catch up on INVU. See you there, my friend!! *hugs* *Rushes to the INVU corner* BWAHAHA...genius...pure genius xD
Author's Response: *smirk* I adore cliffhangers. I try to make any possible chapter a cliffhanger!!!! *laughs*
*nods* thank you!!! Iím sure youíll all like itÖeither that, or stab me
*sobs* Iím sad to see it end too!
*nods* I think that everyone did, but I agree. Itís more interesting to see it written out
Thank you so much, and Iím so glad that I am able to envoke such strong feelings!
*hugs* Iím just about to update it now!!! *holds breath*
Thank you, my friend!
Date: Jul 26, 2010 07:56:02 pm Title: Chapter 18
WAH!! Cliffhanger!! *hyperventilation* My heart is racing. Honest to God. I can barely breathe. Ah!! So, this will be a super short review, because I so desperately want to move on and read the next chapter!!!!! *ZOOM* *zooms back* You're so good at this tension!! Evil Shin, and Strify and Kali are such a good couple. Strify and the egg...that was classic. I loved it!! *fast hugs* *zoom*
Author's Response: *hugs* oh nooooo!!!!!! i hope you feel better! But lol; they are a good couple!!!!
Date: Jul 26, 2010 07:51:02 pm Title: Chapter 17
“I’m so glad you were my first. You’re my rock; my guardian, my lover…my salvation and normality…my freedom and…my everything.” Oh, Kali. If only you knew what he could do to hurt you. *sigh* Poor Kali. I feel so bad for her, and I still have two chapters left to read!! What's going to happen??? The edge of my seat has returned now that I'm back, you have no idea how desperate I was to read this story (and everything else of yours xD) Oh, and roll on Deny It and Driftwood, which I will OF COURSE read, and you know how much I love Deny It anyway xD *hugs* Hope things are a little better for you.
By the way, you mentioned you'd read my stuff on THFF? *blush* Aww...thanks xD Hehe. That makes me feel loved xD *happy happy* Ahem, anyway, NEXT!!!
Author's Response: *sniffle* i agree. if she had known, maybe she wouldn't have put so much faith in him.
I feel sorry for her too...*sad smile and stares at end chapter*
*bounces* OH YAY!!!!! I'm so glad that you're looking forward to Driftwood and Deny it!
I hope they do too but OF COURSE they will, now that we're co-authoring *screams happily*
Yes, i have read your work! i completely fell in love, i'm just...not sure how to review! you've left me such incredible reviews on here, i feel slightly inadequate!!!! LOL!!! And you are loved, my friend
Date: Jul 26, 2010 07:46:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Uh oh. Shadows outside window. Shin is escaping!! *hides* Shin is really freaky...which is great!! I love this story!! *bounces* By the way, this line made me laugh so much: "You weren’t bad. I was the bad one…well, not in bed." LOL. That was awesome xD I shall move on to INVU once I've finished reading this. *hugs* Please don't lose heart!! I missed you while I was in London. I tried to find an internet cafe, but nobody would give up a seat for me, so...*sigh* evil people *grr* Anyway, NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response: *looks over shoulder* Eek, i have a shadow outside my room too...oh...it was just a tree! LOL!!! Maybe i shouldn't have thrown my book at it *runs to get book*
I think he's freaky too, which makes it so much more interesting
*laughs* i do too!!!
*hugs* DAMN LONDONERS WITH THEIR HOGGING-SEAT EVILNESS
but i am glad you missed me
Date: Jul 26, 2010 07:38:21 pm Title: Chapter 15
I'm BACK!!! Hello!! Did you miss me? xD Lol, anyway, so I now have four whole chapters to read and catch up, so this is gonna be pretty short :D But, I KNEW IT!! Shin killed Kali's son, didn't he? *sigh* Bad Shin! I no longer want to hug you and comfort you. You're creeping me out. A lot. *backs away and makes sign of a cross* Lol, anyway...ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response: *hugs* Of COURSE i missed you! i spent every time i came on the site going "When will Nikki come back so i can read her incredible reviews?! i miss her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
But it's awesome that now we can also communicate through MSN
*nods sadly* Yes, he did.
*laughs* do you really think that will help? he'll just follow you!!! *heart*
Date: Jul 26, 2010 02:44:00 pm Title: Chapter 19
No, YOUD NEVER HURT KALI WOULD YOU.
This is amazing, as usual mein darling *smiles*
Author's Response: *hugs* i love that no one has faith in me! but *shifty eyes* you already know the ending! so...
*hugs, sorry mein liebe
Date: Jul 26, 2010 11:11:43 am Title: Chapter 19
Hmmm, i think that you did hint a few times about James, but i never bothered to think of it.
I....think it means that Shin has climbed the tree *hopeful look*
Author's Response: he was playing hide and seek, up the tree
Date: Jul 26, 2010 11:07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I knew Shin killed James! Even before that chapter! ^^ xD *Feeling proud*
Well, love the story, sad it's soon over though. :3
--Natha, one of the MentalTwins. ^^
Author's Response: *hugs* awwwwwww, well maybe you're just smarter than me!!!! *laughs*
Thanks for the review, Natha
Date: Jul 26, 2010 10:16:31 am Title: Chapter 19
*breathes normally* So Kali is alive, but...Shin killed James?!
I liked this line "…because he’d read them on Shin’s file…"
BUT THIS...THIS GAVE ME THE SHIVERS (quote)“What the fuck?” he asked; staring hard at it; now he couldn’t repress a shudder as it began to swing gently back and forth in the wind. “What is that?”(END QUOTE)
What has Shin done?!
Author's Response: ...Something. You'll have to wait until the next chapter
Date: Jul 26, 2010 10:09:46 am Title: Chapter 19
Haha I knew it..I guessed agees ago ^_^
You enjoy torturing us don't you?
Author's Response: *laughs* yeah, i think everyone worked it out! And there i was trying to be sneaky.
Or maybe you're just smart!!!
*nods sadistically* oh yes, i do.
Date: Jul 26, 2010 10:03:40 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh i'm so glad that Kali is alive. i was scared of what Shin would do. but she's alive so it's ok...
Author's Response: *nods* yesm, she is alive and kicking...
*blinks innocently* Shin. he was playing hide and seek, but now they found him. it's ok
Date: Jul 25, 2010 09:47:36 pm Title: Chapter 18
“Will, will you ….gimme head?” Strify laughed; scooping her into a hug. “We never got around to it the first time.”
I LOLED, I LOLLLLLL, I LOLED MORE THAN THE MIYAVI COOKIE THING.
I LITERALLY, LOLED! LOLLOOOO!
That was mean, but hilarius.
Asif kali believed he was dying for one bite of egg though. GAWWWSH, *snuggles*
PHWOAR. Typed the last bite before i saw the end.
Cripes shin, phsyco, need-to-do much.
GODDD. He probably was out of his room last night, doing a bit of watching. What is he FUCKING NINJA.
I'm terrified, im shutting my window, and its been so hot as of late, (though everyone would disagree, i'm just so hating of anything remotely hot xD) my windows been open for weeks, i am officially shutting it, swelter or not, he might get me,
i mean, he might now be real, but what if he comes after everyone whos a strify fangirl *sniffle*
I'M A STRIFY FANGIRL, AND THAT AIN'T NO SECRET.
Oh god... I'll pretend to love gackt more, PLEASE DONT HURT ME SHIN!
XD. I'm only half joking there.. i am actually rather afraid. *snuggle*
Author's Response: *screams like Miyavi* COOOKIIIIIIEEEEEEE
*smirk* go the lol-ing!!! WHOO HOOO!!!
...um....well...whenever people eat food i make, they usually die. it's that bad
He IS a ninja?! HOW DID YOU GUESS?! OMGGGGG *giggles*
Honey, if Shin came to rape you....you can't honestly say no. but yeahhhhh.....he MAY kill you if you're strify's fangirl! NUMBER ONE FANGIRL *ppoints at you* Opps
But...But...Gackt looks like edward Cullen...only hotter
Date: Jul 25, 2010 09:37:23 pm Title: Chapter 17
MMMM sex XD
That was kind acuteee.
Don't want it to end. *turns you into a string puppet and forces you to write forever* Mwhahahahaha!
Author's Response: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH i have an idea for a puppet story!!!!!!! i think i told you last night!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2010 08:18:13 pm Title: Chapter 16
WOWZA babe, im less scared of shin... yet that shadow, i screamed, nevermind kali literally in that scene, i laid a brick xD
nyway, wowza, bad strify, dont lie, you were bad in bed xD
Uhmmm, i lolled at kind of end of flashback, that was epicness encapsulated.
Annnd.. now.. sex..
*snuggles you* tis okay!
Author's Response: MWahAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....you won't be less-scared in a few chapters time!
YAY SEXI TIME!
Date: Jul 25, 2010 08:12:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
I thought shin was goading her when he said about i even killed your..
No, this is wrong, IM TERRIFIED SARAH.
I cannae get this out of my head.
I'm flailing like a bad-flail doll. *sniffle*
This is amazing though, but, *wide eyes*
Author's Response: *laughs hysterically then soothes* Would i really do something bad to Kali?! Would I?! *blink*
Date: Jul 25, 2010 08:07:45 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'll admit im terrified of shin..
I'm so scared, i can't review, i must go ONWARD. *runs around*
Author's Response: and it will only get worse. this is known as sexyshinphyscoobsessedwithstrifyandhateskali-phobia
Date: Jul 25, 2010 07:59:58 pm Title: Chapter 13
PHSYCOSHIN IS SCARY.
I wonder how this story updates got under my radar for so long. *sniffles*
Author's Response: *hugs* awwwwwwwwwwww, but now you're reviewing so it's like YAY!!! i missed your reviews though, it made me sad
Date: Jul 25, 2010 03:24:51 pm Title: Chapter 18
Poor Kali and Strify. but i am so glad that they've got all their emotions out of the way and are ready to move on with their lives.
why did Shin hit him?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You'll find that out soon enough
Date: Jul 25, 2010 03:22:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
I just keep gravitating back to these chapters and trying to work out what's going on!!!
“Please, please, please let him pick up,” Kali whispered as she sat in the dark. “Strife, I need you.”
The phone kept on ringing.
“Please, please, please,” She chanted, picking at her nails nervously as the dial tone thrummed in her ear.
it's so sad and desperate
P.s. i liked this (quote)
Author's Response: *laughs* that's awesome!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2010 02:37:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ok, now that i am not shocked anymore, i will resume the commenting.
I'm so happy that they're working out their differances. they both have completely valid points.
and yay that they're going to find James
Author's Response: *laughs* good strategy!!!
I think they both do too, and that it's awesome they're looking for hteir son
Date: Jul 24, 2010 01:26:43 pm Title: Chapter 17
*moans* Oh goodness... Wow!! I... I... I LOVE ITTTT!!! It was so amazing and perfect and awsome and hot and wooooow!!!!! Yay You!!!!! *claps*
Noooo!! Only 3 more to go? *cries* I don't want it to be over, I don't wanna!!! Mommy!!!!
Uuuuu!! Yay for new story, I think I saw banner in your album on fb!!!
Aww! That was hott!!
Author's Response: *hugs* oh yay!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*hugs* it'll be ok honey!!!!!!!!!!
*nods* probably!!! :)
Date: Jul 24, 2010 03:50:01 am Title: Chapter 15
(quote)Shin crossed over to the window; and stared down at Strify’s Cadillac as he left. He even waved; before the blonde-haired male pulled up the mattress on his bed; and pulled out a folder. One contained Kali’s file; with all her medical info and address while the other showed her baby boy James; and an article that related to his murder.
Strify was in for a shock. But it was ok; because once Shin killed Kali; there would be no interference at all…(end quote)
Part of me wants him to Kill her, but part of me knows it will be terrible for Strify
Author's Response: *nods* i agree, but it'll depend on how i think at the end of the story
Date: Jul 24, 2010 03:40:13 am Title: Chapter 15
(quote) Shin started to cry; his thin shoulders heaving.
“You don’t love her,” he wailed. “You love me. You love me. YOU LOVE ME!”
“Shin, I’ve tried to help you but…” Strify shook his head, stepping back. “I don’t know if I’m the person to do it.”
Shin looked up, panicked.
Poor Shin! i htink he really didn't mean any harm, he's just too deranged to act normally and accept htat Strify doesn't want to be with him
Author's Response: yeah, i feel sorry for Shin too
Date: Jul 24, 2010 03:37:49 am Title: Chapter 14
(quote)“Shut up” She snarled. “I’ll never fucking let you have him. Strify is mine, always has been. You’ll have to kill me first.”
Shin’s eyes lit up and she wished she hadn’t said it.
“Okay,” He laughed; sounding like a little boy. “You’re the one who made the mistake of coming here. Now I know what I have to do…besides; it’s not like it’ll be my first time. I’ve killed before. I even killed your s…Oops, almost said too much.”
Somehow, i don't think this will end well!
Author's Response: me either, to be honest
Date: Jul 24, 2010 03:28:11 am Title: Chapter 15
Strify did as asked. Shin smirked. The dumb bitch was too scared to use her own name; and it was too bad…That might have been the one thing that would have saved her from him.
Oh wow! that's an excellant point. if he had put her real name into the register, then Strify would have been able to like...help her more
Author's Response: me too, but she didn't so....
Date: Jul 24, 2010 03:20:59 am Title: Chapter 16
The flashback was so sweet, and i can't wait til the next chapter! Go sex!!!! :)
Also, think of it positively, as a good omen. maybe something will come of it. i mean, yesterday was like the "month date 23rd" anniversery so i think that's a good sign
Author's Response: I hope it is!!!!
Date: Jul 24, 2010 03:19:02 am Title: Chapter 15
(quote)“Ok,” Strify apologized. “I’m sorry. You were right. Listen, Shin…would you like to talk about your family?”
Shin blushed; and looked at the ground.
“Not really,” He smiled strangely. “They’re not a very lively bunch. I don’t want you to meet them.”
Hmmm, maybe that's because they're dead?! LMAO
I really like this story, it's gettin more and more intense
Author's Response: *hugs* lmao, i know! i thought it was funny too. Thank you
Date: Jul 23, 2010 10:46:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
“Like I can’t breathe, like you’re the only thing keeping me alive and I need to keep breathing in the same air because if I stop, I’ll die.”-- this sounds so familiar!!! Have you written that before in some story, God it's killing me. It's on the top of my tongue and I just can's remember it!!! *sigh*
Anyway,I like the closeness between those two. It just makes me awww. Lol!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!! Really?!!!??!! I am all his!!!! Lol! *is lost in thoughts once again* Hah! I get that quite often.
YAAAAAAYYYYY!!! I was the first to leave a comment!!! Yay me!!! *claps*
Author's Response: I'm about 99% sure it came from 12912. i tend to reuse sweet saying when i'm depressed and hating my life too much to write something originial.
*laughs* Yes, you are!!!
*claps* YAY YOU!!!!
Date: Jul 22, 2010 09:53:18 pm Title: Chapter 15
“Strife!” He grinned. “I knew you liked me…so, shall we fuck?”-- ah! He's being so direct. Lol! Me likey it! *laughs*
"...Shin smirked. The dumb bitch was too scared to use her own name; and it was too bad…That might have been the one thing that would have saved her from him."-- wow! Is he actually going to kill her? Not that it bothers me but still. I'm curious. xD Lol!
I honestly don't know what to expect from Shin anymore, but whatever happens, I'm on his side. *smirks* If you need help with killing her, let me know. Okay, Shinchiro? *hugs*
Oh!! I can't wait for his plan. I bet it will be gooooooooood!!! *smirks*
Of course I adore him!! *smiles* I don't think I can hate him or somthing like that. Only thing I hate about him is that he change his hair colour. *cries* But I have to accept it. *sigh* But yeah, I'm a little scared of him too. When he says all those dreadful things. *shakes*
Yeah, I agree with you, she is
self-centered. I hate those people, I always share my stuff with others. Well, not the private ones. *giggles*
AnywayZ; awsome chapter,you made me get inerested even more. Ah! Our Shin!! What could we do without him? *is lost in thoughts*
Author's Response: *laughs* well, i don't thhink Shin will kill her, but he WILL take you up on the help offer. he MAY need some help with something else *sexual things*
Yeah, i think we'll all have to accept the different hair, but still....
She is, she's lame like that
Date: Jul 22, 2010 12:36:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
AAAHHH!!! *flails* you've been making me do that a lot lately (the flailing, I mean). This is getting INTENSE!!!! *spaz* You HAVE to update!!!
Author's Response: *hugs* AWWWWWWWWWWWWW< THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Date: Jul 22, 2010 12:32:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
*flails* Holy crap!! I'm, quite literally, at the edge of my seat!! I feel bad for Kali, (and no I fear for her life) which should make you proud, because I can only think of two other stories where I actually liked the OFCs.
OH MAH GAWD. Must read next chapter...
Author's Response: *hugs* it'll be ok honey!!!!!
*laughs* Oh that's awesome! that does make me proud!!!
Date: Jul 22, 2010 10:55:04 am Title: Chapter 15
“I knew you liked me…so, shall we fuck?” That reminded me of True blood, somethng the queen once said, kinda strange xD
Shinny can't kill Kali...coz..i don't know, I'm still figuring that out. i guess something inside me wants Strfiy and Kali to be together, Happy endings and all that but Shin and Strify are soo cute, and Shin is just adorable. I don't want Shin to get hurt.
Author's Response: WOW, that's pretty random! LOL!!!!
*laughs* you'd better decide soon, cause i don't think he'll wait
Date: Jul 21, 2010 10:26:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
"...You’ll have to kill me first.”
Shin’s eyes lit up and she wished she hadn’t said it.
“Okay,” He laughed..."-- *laughs* Oh Shinnie, did I ever told you how much I adore you? Well, I do. A LOT!!! Lol!
It's not that I hate Kali but, I don't like her either. I feel sympathy for her but nothing else. Well, currently. I dunno. My feeling for her are messed up so I don't want to talk about that. Gah! Idiot, you brought the theme in the first place!!
I feel bad for Strify though. He's around two mental patients- correctly; one ex-mental patient who still has problems and the other one who's just crazy (and I love so much but that's not important right now. Lol!).
I'll keep my fingers crossed for j'him, 'cause I don't know what else he's going to get thru. Good luck!!
Author's Response: *laughs* everyone else is scared, but you adore him!! *hugs*
I don't like her either. i think that's she's a little...bitcy, and self-centered for my tastes. she tends to blame strify for everything, when she also made bad decisions.
Date: Jul 21, 2010 10:06:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! Oh my God!! Shin you're creepy. But I still love you! xD
You've said right, Shin IS the story. I totally agree with you. Lol! But he still scares me.
*goes to read another chapter* See? I stopped running, even though I want to. I fell over the branches a few times. *pouts*
Author's Response: *laughs hysterically* i like that first line!!!
*hugs* well, i hope you're ok
Date: Jul 21, 2010 05:24:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah I can't stop reading it, it's not a normal story one that you see what's going to happen next. It's sooooooooooooo amazing!!!!
Author's Response: *bounces with joy* YAY that is so awesome. i like to keep you all guessing