nice!!! and I can't help but think of the song Broken Hearts Parade by Good Charlotte when I look at the story title sis XD!! great job on the story though.

Author's Response: *hugs* Awwww! I love that song, it's my favourite Good Charlotte song from their Good Morning Revival album!

*tear* that had soo much menaing and emotion...i loved it...it was angelic and beautiful but also sad...it was amazing...luv kasumi xoxox

Author's Response: *hugs* thank you. It meant a lot to me at the time, and honestly, i still think it does. I dont' want to be with the person it was written about anymore, but i think that eventually, the essence of the story will have to repeat itself *le sigh*

*hugs* but i am so pleased you liked it! From Sarah

this was so sad. there was so much pain and hurt in this fanfiction while it still managed to be beautiful

and i really really liked it alot

Author's Response: Thank you so much Brody! i have a friend named brody!! LOL

Aaaaahhhh!!! *wails* This is terrible!! I mean, it's wonderful, but you damn near made me cry!!!

The letter was so real.... *sniffles*

And the nature metaphor was definitely one of the most beautiful things I have ever read.

Excellent job, darling.

Author's Response: *hugs* I understood honey; i was crying while writing it

*sad smile* maybe parts of it are real. Just maybe...

Thank you very much! I adore writing pieces like this, so to hear your praise it makes me so very happy!!!

*hugglez* Danke, mein liebe

amazing

i loved it so much!!! You're very talented so i hope you keep on writing!

yay for you and taren!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Lauren

incredible. i loved it!!!

good for you and taren :)

Author's Response: Thanks brooke

*blinks and sobs*

I htink my favourite part was about the sky; and how even though you know they're there for you; you can still feel them slipping away.

This was haunting and beautiful and it made me cry. Well done, Sarah. i loved it

AND...i am so happy you and Taren are ok

Author's Response: *nods8 me too, i thought i wrote it well. thank you, i am so happy you liked it and that you're glad we're ok

Wow that was epic.
It was so touching.
I wanted to cry *sniff*
I don't want to do such a long review, with every second and everything i felt.
So im going to leave it at this.
That was amazing, so touching, so moving, your words were chilling yet filled with such beauty, and you are so poetic.

Now to fangirl. I LOVE YOU XD *hugs*
Keep writing mein sexy.

Author's Response: Thank you so much; my beautiful wifey. I understand that you don't want to write a long review for it, but even this short review made me smile so much

thank you so much, love. I love writing poetry so this fanfic was amazing to write

I LOVE YOU TOOOOOO *licks and hugs*

I will, mein liebe

Aww man, you made me cry :) That was so sweet, and heartbreaking. This line, in particular:

You were the first love I ever truly had, the only one who can crush me then fix me in an instant, with a single word. The only one who hurts this badly, and yet I keep coming back for more. I keep blaming myself for not being good enough, for everything.

Just, incredible. Words can't describe how incredible that line was. It made me wonder about relationships, about love and life and loss in general. I've never felt what Strify is feeling in this fic, so I guess you showed me a little of what it's like to be hurt in that way. But this, this was truly awe-inspiring. I really, really loved it, and I've told you over and over how talented you are, so this just goes to show how right I am :D I love how gentle the letter was, whilst at the same time harsh, and cold, bearing the truth and being hurt by it...just amazing. So, anyway, on a last note, I love how you were like "Don't worry! We're FINE!" xD So funny, lol. Yeah, so, very cool, I loved it, keep up the awesome work! *hugs*

Author's Response: Sorry Hon, i cried while writing it. I tried to make it about anyone who has ever loved someone and had to let them go

I liked that line too Thank you; i've never felt it either...but...idk, i just wanted to use all of my emotionals to channel such a fanfic!

THANK YOU! You see, i cannot see my Fanfiction potential; but in poetry or...idk...stories with metaphorical meanings such as this, my "talent" does show!!! TAHNK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree, i think that Strify was so hurt and pained but he didn't want to offend Yu because he still loved Yu after everything.

*giggles* well, i didn't want you all worrying about wether or not we were

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH! You made my morning